We met where steeples cleave the dusk,
Where incense hung like amber dust,
And silence learned to call love just.

Your hand was flame against my palm.
The world grew distant, pale, and calm.
A song undone became our psalm.

The apple shone with darker shine,
Pressed from a grief more old than time
We ate, and knew the eating fine.

The kiss was slow. The stars withdrew.
The firmament forgot its truth.
Creation held its breath and knew

Your mouth: a flame half-understood.
My ribs: a chapel built of wood.
We burned exactly as we should.

Our bodies knelt, though not by choice.
The angels lost their leading voice.
The void enjoined us to rejoice.

The final bell remained unswung.
The Mass was said, but never sung.
The end began where beginning stung.

The constellations broke their schemes,
Their patterns lost to ruined themes,
And heaven shuddered in its dreams.

The planets faltered in their spin.
The ordered dance grew paper-thin
We watched the turning fold within.

The galaxies drew closed their gate.
No brightness left to consecrate
A hush consumed the vast estate.

Time loosened all it thought it knew.
Its moments dimmed from gold to blue
It knelt, and then it knelt anew.

The void remembered its first breath.
Its cradle-silence, prior to death
A hymnal made of nothingness.

Yet through that dark, our vow remained.
No star endured, no law sustained
But still, our ruin was ordained.

We held each other past the fall.
The end of form, of space, of all
Love outlasts what is cardinal.

No shape remained to speak our name.
No voice recalled from whence we came.
One hunger burned. It was the flame.

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7 responses to “Adam and Eve”

  1. danu40k Avatar

    Love it

    It makes you think about this theme and the different interpretations.

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    1. D. H. Jervis Avatar

      I know you like mythological/theological themes from reading your own work and write about them well. So I’m glad you like it. You’re a good judge of this stuff.

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  2. Heather Mirassou Avatar

    Dwight, your poem echoes the spiritual journey of Adam and Eve and how I would envision it. Your rhyme and rhythm are flowing like a river over rocks in the early morning. Your imagery perfect and edge of your seat story telling. This is a very poignant poem, one that will resonate with me for a long time. Kudos, my friend!

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    1. D. H. Jervis Avatar

      Thank you Heather. Your words mean a lot. I’m encouraged to keep writing.
      The D in D. H. is Dominic (or Dom). But not to worry, I’ve been called far, far worse things than Dwight ❤

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  3. william sinclair manson (Billy.) Avatar

    awe brilliant, very insightful…

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These poems are moments pulled from the folds of everyday life, memory, myth and imagination. They are invitations to pause, to notice, and to enter the spaces between words.

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