The iron enters bone in thread,
the void leans close with iron breath;
the sky turns black and bows its head.

A charged wind keens through flesh and grief
storm-fields align the hidden core;
the clouds split wide in cosmic sheath.

The nails conduct the starless roar,
each pulse a drag against the night;
the world tilts on its trembling floor.

Blood-iron wakes to rising light,
drawn upward by the storm’s decree;
the beam shakes with a deepened might.

The thunder forms a gravity
pulling through seams no eye can trace;
the field bends time’s geometry.

A final spark in vacant space
reverses night’s imploding frame;
the heavens tear in soundless grace.

Blood-iron hums its ancient claim,
a current older than the tomb,
ascending through the stellar flame.

We feel release within the gloom,
as iron tears from wood and plea
the sky becomes a widening womb.

And what ascends is pulled to be
within the field none can avoid:
Star to iron, and iron to He.

Arisen flesh of the iron void

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8 responses to “Arma Christi (Clavus)”

  1. Nihil Avatar
    Nihil

    A unique take. Though I question the finality of a last spark, as well as the involution of space. But, this is not the scope of your poem. Well done.

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    1. D. H. Jervis Avatar

      Thanks for your comments. They are really very much appreciated.
      I’m not entirely sure about the spark either. I’ll need to explore it further. Its an electro-magnetic spark and I’m curious in the relation between the magnetic effect in the iron of the nails, the iron in the blood and the magnetic field of earth itself (particularly if we consider a magnetic storm during the crucifixion)
      Again, thank you for your thoughts.

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      1. Nihil Avatar
        Nihil

        Ah. Elektrons. This takes me back to a few places. My pleasure. Talk is cheap, thoughts are free – it’s no bother at all. I only ever come to WordPress for free thought exchange. An increasingly steep hill for poor hobbled Sisyphus.

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      2. D. H. Jervis Avatar

        Yes, yes indeed.
        I’ll look forward to further free exchange.

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      3. Nihil Avatar
        Nihil

        We’ll see what sparks my flights of fancy. Feel free to do likewise. Whatever floats your boat or sinks your dingy.

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  2. Jasmine on the Grave Avatar

    The great ordeal. Beautiful.

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  3. william sinclair manson (Billy.) Avatar

    oooo that was very high on imagination..

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