It began with the lamps
forgetting to shine.

Their light folded inward,
Wings in sleeping pose

Streets loosened their seams,
stones cooling beneath absence.

The river lost its way,
turned inward,
dreaming of seas unseen.

Houses sighed once,
then drew the night
around their shoulders.

Curtains dreamed of faces,
porch steps of laughter,
a cradle left swinging.


Empty.


The clock’s hands
rested against each other.

Time held its breath.

No one was gone
only the town
remembering a heartbeat
that never echoed

outside the womb.

And in that stillness,
a single fire trembled,
as if trying to ignite
someone it loved.

Then it, too,
closed its eyes.

The town drifted down,
window by window,
door by door,

until all that remained
was the sound
of sleeping brick,
and a river’s slow forgetting
circling into silence.

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14 responses to “Still”

    1. D. H. Jervis Avatar

      Thank you. I get a bit nervous posting personal stuff, so it means a lot.

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      1. william sinclair manson (Billy.) Avatar

        its a way to vent pal, it is all good.

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      2. D. H. Jervis Avatar

        Very true mate. Thanks for that.

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  1. Heather Mirassou Avatar

    Wow! Very powerful. Your metaphors and imagery are excellent. Great job!

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    1. D. H. Jervis Avatar

      You leave such lovely comments. Thank you so much.

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    1. Heather Mirassou Avatar

      It is because the comments are true!

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  2. Stara Esoterica Avatar
    Stara Esoterica

    I am grateful for how you write grief as sacred, with a gentle tone. Very beautiful.

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  3. Dominic Alapat Avatar

    Great feeling, imagery, and power here. An inspired piece of writing!

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    1. D. H. Jervis Avatar

      Thank you mate. Thats a lovely thing to say. I appreciate it.

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Poetry
These poems are moments pulled from the folds of everyday life, memory, myth and imagination. They are invitations to pause, to notice, and to enter the spaces between words.

One written each day.

Some days are a prick.
Some are a blessing.

Thorn and Benediction.

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